Ah! It is not rainy season
From where fell
The rain drops!
It is thirsty Summer
Long lonely roads simmer
Butfrom where
fell the rain drops
I looked up
And found
One floating cloud
Showering blessings
From above
Oh I know, I know
I was waiting for it
All these years!
Hi Bharati, That is extremely beautiful. I felt as if I was at the first shloka of Meghasandeasham. Good work, Enjoyed re-re-reading.
Thank you so much.Do you refer to the work of great Sanskrit poet Kalidasha?
Simple and beautiful. Rain brings peace and solace to mind. Liked it.
I've experienced rain on a sunny day. Your poem reminds me of that while strikingly deeper chords! TFS
I looked up and found one floating cloud showering blessings from above...I sincerely admire and appreciate the poet's keen observation of natural beauty. A fabulous poem...just fabulous dear poetess!
Butfrom where fell the rain drops I looked up And found One floating cloud......meaningful poem with lofty theme. Visited time and again. Five stars.
A second visit of this marvellous poem makes me feel in addition to that I have already commented that off-season clouds though barren are capable of dropping down a bit of waster on its way.perhaps like a gift. The cloud can be a herald of the coming rainy season too
Perhaps I'll make room for this one in a 2nd July 2021 showcase. bri : )
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, dear Bharati, also for your beloved family. A 10++++++++++++++++++ for the Vote. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your caring family. Enjoy your day. This poem is simply worded, but most beautiful than ever. Least words, loveliest, Bharati!